This is adorable! I love the whole idea and to make it even more effective, in my opinion you could separate the phrases:
They had love to push them,
but no one loves me.
and:
They always had good times,
but no one ever spent time with me
and also with the next phrase.. it make the message and the narrators loneliness more effective and obvious.
Anyway I love this (: really well done x
They had love to push them,
but no one loves me.
and:
They always had good times,
but no one ever spent time with me
and also with the next phrase.. it make the message and the narrators loneliness more effective and obvious.
Anyway I love this (: really well done x