I really enjoyed this one. It really held me until the end. I loved the last two lines especially! It always amazes me how you are able to write so little ans say so much. i truly appreciate the poem. it spoke to me so clearly. You'd think the concept would be hard to understand but i understood it perfectly. As I was reading I noticed how it all just flowed so perfectly together. How it being one stanza made it seem one cmplete thought than if you were to break it up into multiple stanzas. I liked it really and am glad that you wrote it the way you did. Your structure, as always, truly is amazing and wonderfully shown;as if you took so much time and effort to write each word correctly when probably in reality it just flowed to you so smoothly. I can't tell you how much your writing really shows and your point of view(s) always truly are unique in their own way and yet they compliment each other so well.
February 7th, 2012 at 08:21am