Wahahwahhh. *speechlessness* Well not really speechless. Least not for long :D Anyways, wahhh, Wow. This was really good, I could really connect to it. I think a poem is always better if I can connect to it personally, and wow did I CONNECT. This was really good, and as I can see a lot of your poems have a free flow kinda thang going on. I think it's pretty unique. Word of advice, read them out loud. See if they flow, see if the words mingle and make some sort of rhythm. Poetry is always more fun and enjoyable to read if there is a rhythm.
May 19th, 2011 at 11:16pm