The Hypocrite - Comments

  • Deanie

    Deanie (100)

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    I love the description and what it builds towards at the end. I really love this poem, because people can really relate to it too. It's great :c)
    June 3rd, 2011 at 03:11pm
  • Just_A_Writer

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    I love that the end of your poem wraps it up and comes to a conclusion. I thought it was beautiful :)
    May 20th, 2011 at 09:48pm