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    perfect disaster; (100)

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    Another poem I had to write for school, and [i]yes[/i] I wrote this about swinging and not anything else, since winter was officially over and it was nicer outside and I would walk to the park by my house and swing for hours. I had blisters on my hands for two weeks, but it was so worth it. And ironically enough, I believe the other poem I wrote for school, [i]The Rain (Part 2)[/i], was better and this poem got a better score by [i]one[/i] point.
    June 1st, 2011 at 06:59pm