Lovers in Ink - Comments

This is incredible. I especially loved the last two lines. I've read almost all of your poems on Mibba and I am never disappointed. You are a very talented writer.

This was excruciatingly beautiful. Tell me you have this published somewhere in an official stance? This is lovely. I was mesmerized from line one.

You talked about how you got pulled out of the poem a few times in my poetry and I noticed there were places where I felt like that. I don't know if it helped or hurt though because, to me, it felt like I was moving with the words, "pushing apart, back and forth in an endless rhythm."

Does that make sense?

My LAWD, you have some real talent. With each line, I kept losing myself a little bit more. It seems like you really put your blood, sweat, and tears into writing this poem, and I can see why you have 20 paragraph long comments on this. Every single word just took my breath away, I can imagine this being in textbooks one day. This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read in my entire life, and I can tell you this is the longest comment on a poem I've ever written.

This poem was amazing. I felt like it really painted a picture in my mind. I could see your characters twirling and dancing in the middle of an elegant dance floor. I thought your use of repetition, when you used a couple of lines twice, was extremely effective. Your word choice was amazing, and I thought some of your words really added to the fantasy, royal theme that you continued to use throughout this poem. I absolutely love this! :]

Oh, God. Talk about heart wrenchingly beautiful.
Gosh. I didn't know this kind of talent was ON Mibba! Dang, once again your imagery takes my breath away. I've hardly ever read anything this good. You could publish this, really.
And the emotions.. They pull at me and fill me and jeez, it makes me want to cry.
I love you work. Seriously.

I've read poetry like this, and yours is some of the best. It reminded me of what happens when one writes, and how they make characters that they both love and envy, and their beautiful story. The description is vivid and lovely, and I'm definitely going to read more of yours

Absolutely amazing, oh my god.

Okay, I love the repetition of the beginning and the end; it fits perfectly. I also liked the imagery you used, how they were dancing and you could almost picture it with the “push apart, back and forth.”

You included dancing and writing in a short yet simple poem, and it worked flawlessly. Just the single line, “at the hem of the skirt of romance” is so beautiful.

I'm usually not big on poetry, but this is very well written and I'd love to read some of your other work! :)

Well, I never really read much poetry before.
But I really liked this. I like how it told a sort of story, and it was just very vivid and...well, good. C:

This is really great! I like the way it told a story and the way you used stanza's like that. :D
You can really imagine what is going on in the poem, great work!

The unique and well put words create a beautiful image in my head. I felt like I was in some fantasy world. Your poetry is amazing. I don't read much poetry. I used to write it, but I feel ashamed of writing it after reading this. Nothing can compare. Stunning :)

I'm going to pretty much repeat the others by saying that I don't read much poetry so I probably can't give you the best criticism. I think this was a beautiful piece though. The way you repeated the 'And how you twirled and twisted' part was just wonderful! I could almost see them dancing because it was so amazing. I most liked it because even though it wasn't happy-go-lucky it wasn't a sad poem either. <3

I think your choice of words are brilliant and the way it all flowed so well is also just very nice. I envy you! <3

I don't read/write much poetry, so I can't give you a very professional critique, but I do think this was beautifully written. <3 It's not like lots of the poetry I've read - usually dark and depressing, I mean. This had a very [i]light[/i] or graceful feel to it and I loved it. It was like doing a...waltz; elegant and graceful. Simply beautiful. (:

This was absolutely beautiful! I don't read a lot of poetry on here because most of it is so depressing and what-not it makes me want to slit my wrists. But this, it has a sad tinge to it, yes. Yet it's a nice touch to the poem. You've got a very graceful way of writing and it reminds me of some old school poet. You're very talented. :)

I'm really, really horrible at interpreting poetry so I usually just don't read it, but I liked this. Your word choices are pretty, and that's how I would describe this whole poem: pretty. I don't know if that's what you were going for (because once again I can't interpret poems the right way) but I still liked it a lot :)

i agree it all seemed to go together like all the words were made for each other and were just waiting for you to put them in the right spot. i like your descriptivness and this poem is really good

This is beautiful. I love it. It had a great flow to it and, well, it's just beautiful. xD

I love it. I seriously have a tear in my eye. I'm such a wimpy wimp. :) This is beautiful. Great.

I love this. I love the rhythm you have and how you easily convey tge emotions in the piece. I adored the flow and how it all worked together, sort of like a movie.

I really adore the second to last stanza. Especially the first line. It sort of sets a...dramatic mood to the "movie".
:D I'm commenting on two <3

I really enjoyed this!
It really shows your emotion and its very relatable.
There have been many times that I've written something for someone or about someone and wished it were true or felt as if it really were true.
Great work =3

I love this! It really reminded me why I have started writing to begin with. I miss writing pen to paper(or, in my case, pencil--pens hate me.)

Your poem, though it's not at all rhyme-y, I love how it plants the seed of an image in my head and grows into a sort of... video of sorts. I feel like I can [i]see[/i] the words in your poem dancing. XD Weird, I know; but still.

Lovely work, love! I've been needing this sort of inspiration! <3