wanting revenge - Comments

  • MyBrokenRomance

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    yep,i like twists XD
    July 24th, 2011 at 03:19pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    thanks :)
    i like to confuse XD
    July 24th, 2011 at 03:19pm
  • LifesJustMyCupOfTea

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    Dark yet amazing. I like how at first she tried to help then back stabbed him! :D
    July 24th, 2011 at 03:12pm
  • spacejunkie

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    This was a bit confusing at first, but I think that's because it's the most complex of yours that I've read. I think this is one of your best poems.
    July 24th, 2011 at 03:07pm
  • MyBrokenRomance

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    thanks :)
    <3
    July 24th, 2011 at 01:27pm
  • tamashi ryu

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    this is really good. i love it
    July 23rd, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • EverRose

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    This is pretty good. Conflicting as it seems the girl is going to help her but then decides not to for her own reasons.

    This was really good. The flow was a bit odd but it was still good. I wish you did pick different words. as I feel something more elaborate would have fit this better.

    Loved it, nonetheless.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:40pm