I have to admit, the title's what made me click on it :P But it's, well, the first thing that came to my mind was "Dayyyumm" 'cause, even though it's written casually without all that sometimes annoying twenty-four syllable word crap, it has feeling.
For example, when I read it, I got the impression that you were just tired and sick and fed up with whatever this person was doing. Kinda like "-.- You know? Fuck you and your imaginary friend". It seems stupid to say that, since it's plainly wrote out in the poem, but I mean the [i]feeling[/i] of the poem was fed up and tired, like if you stripped it of the words, you'd still rel...
Yeah, so, enough of my babbling! Point is, I really love this piece :) Great work!
For example, when I read it, I got the impression that you were just tired and sick and fed up with whatever this person was doing. Kinda like "-.- You know? Fuck you and your imaginary friend". It seems stupid to say that, since it's plainly wrote out in the poem, but I mean the [i]feeling[/i] of the poem was fed up and tired, like if you stripped it of the words, you'd still rel...
Yeah, so, enough of my babbling! Point is, I really love this piece :) Great work!