I know you posted this almost a year ago but I wanted to comment anyway. It's very sweet and flows nicely. The spelling mistakes and use of number did make it difficult to read at first though. You should probably correct them. Maybe look through your older poems as well just to make sure nothing needs to be fixed. If you do correct the mistakes in this one you should drop me a comment. I would gladly recommend it. =)
May 28th, 2012 at 09:16pm