sean really was an a$$hole - Comments

I'm not good with grammar, so I'm not going to say it's wrong. Plus this is a poem so it can be however the author wants it to be. I actually thought the cat pee was a funny touch, but that's just me.

the thing about a lot of my writing is that I know, completely, how to use "proper" grammar but I kind of like experimenting with different ways of writing something. I understand if it bothers you, though. It's not for everyone.

Sean definitely was my previous boyfriend to the guy I was with in this poem.

Wow. This was good. It needs some editing and grammar stuff but most things do and that doesn't mean they're awful.

I liked it. I got a little grossed out about the cat piss thing, course I would freak out over that personally.

Well written though. But who's Sean? Was he like her ex. or something or what?