Absolutely amazing. I love it! The last three stanzas were just perfect, and especially the last line. Your description, the entire feel of this poem, everything was just... exactly what I look for in poems that have to do with Summer. It makes me think of the poems that last a while, that people still read years later, as it just... has that 'rightness' to it. Something that clicks. I'm definitely bookmarking this one, so I can read it again and again.
I'm not... overly fond of the first stanza, to be completely honest, but that's probably just me being weird.
Still, I love this poem. You did an excellent job, truly! :)
I'm not... overly fond of the first stanza, to be completely honest, but that's probably just me being weird.
Still, I love this poem. You did an excellent job, truly! :)