Great poem. I really like the way that you were able to make this flow and have the rhymes use different words, ones that aren't as commonly thought up. This is a great example of the prompt, finding beauty in music, yet showing how this can be an unexpected place to find it as well. Great job all around, the only place you lost points was that the poem didn't completely capture me in it. However, you did a good job, I love how you made this original and made the prompt your own.
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 3/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 28/30
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 3/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 28/30