Despite the shortness of this poem i actually quite enjoyed it and liked the way you portrayed the battle between addiction and staying sober. I did feel that while it mainly flowed a few spots didn't flow as well, perhaps it was because the poem was so small that It didn't have the chance to really develop and show its flow? Still a really great poem, I honestly can't stop ranitng about how much I love the way you portrayed this. Good job.
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 4/5
Ability to capture my attention 4/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 28/30
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 4/5
Ability to capture my attention 4/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 28/30