Wow this poem is really unique and is powerful in its own right. I like how you started out with such a powerful outlook on faith or your lack of it, then turned this poem into a personal thing and even related it to the contest. I really adored this poem and think it deserves to be right up there with the others. I can't promise you will win this contest but the point isn't supposed to be about winning, or being "The next Edgar Allen Poe" but to discover a joy for poetry and get better as you go on. You've accomplished this and have made great works for this contest. In fact, to let you in on a secret I've recced a poem that I thought was great from everyone in the contest. So don't get down on yourself, even though it turned into an amazing poem like this. Also I really enjoyed the layout you had for this story stating some lines boldly with only a few words in them. It really added to this poem and made it amazing. Great job :D
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30