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  • miser

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    The first stanza is probably my favourite.
    I love your metaphors, they create wonderful imagery.
    They're very creative and innovative.
    Nice work.
    November 5th, 2011 at 12:53pm
  • Neche Narcissist

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    I love the flow to this. It had a dark edgy feel that worked great with the poem. I enjoyed it good job.
    October 31st, 2011 at 12:13pm
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