I am in awe, this was utterly fantastic. It goes under my favorite poems found on Mibba list. It just wow, mind blowing. I can't critique this at all, I just think it's amazing. I was going to say how much I enjoyed the beginning, especially the line about the Prime Minister of Canada. But then I loved the middle, and the end. Thus I can't really say anything other than this is superb and I loved it and you should give yourself quite a few pats on the back for this :)
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30