"You're never get anywhere"
I think that should be "you'll"
I really liked this:
"Repeating the same lines
you've heard in your mind for years,
nothing you do can change it."
I can really identify with this. It's like when everyone else is sleeping and those thoughts creep up, the same voice that has always been there finally able to be heard in the silence.
I also really liked this:
"There's nowhere to turn, so you'll stay in the hole
that you allowed yourself get pulled into."
I usually end up rolling my eyes at poetry, but I actually really enjoyed reading this!
I think that should be "you'll"
I really liked this:
"Repeating the same lines
you've heard in your mind for years,
nothing you do can change it."
I can really identify with this. It's like when everyone else is sleeping and those thoughts creep up, the same voice that has always been there finally able to be heard in the silence.
I also really liked this:
"There's nowhere to turn, so you'll stay in the hole
that you allowed yourself get pulled into."
I usually end up rolling my eyes at poetry, but I actually really enjoyed reading this!