Ode to the Outcasts - Comments

I really like the message you bring across within this poem! The title really does tie in fabulously with the general plot. Being an outcast seems to be a really common theme within poems, but you've totally made this your own and it works really well.

I like the rhythmic quality this has to it. I don't read many poems, but I do love it when the rhythm is almost perfect as it is here. It just makes the poem flow so much easier, especially with the fact that you've chosen to use such short stanzas.

I think my favourite part has to be the last bit. I don't know if I've interpreted it right, but the idea of pointing out that the word is run by all of the people that you've mentioned is a really interesting concept (and a true one at that!).

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i like this! ;D

This amazing.. I love the title! I saw it and I said, I just have to read this! :D

Perfect rhythm
These types of poems are my favourite!
So original!

Only one mistake in this but I really like it :)