Second Lover - Comments

I adore this! :3 I think the bolding and italicization really added and made an impact. I personally don't do that because I'm lazy (guilty) so I appreciate it more when I see it in other poems. The rhythm was a bit sketchy, but it was mostly steady, but what I think made me really adore this poem was the soft but erratic feel to it. You know what I mean? There was no easing in to anything or stanzas and that makes this poem quite unique. Keep writing! :D

-Penny

It's a great ... I'm guessing that shes got one dude but keeps thinking about the other guy woundering if she made the right choice by going with this one who cares for her I'm not sure that's what I get out of it

I love this and I guess she's with this one dude but only sees this other dude who she's in love with but doesn't know she's in love with.....Man thats complicated

i love this<3mm..im probably wrong but whatever. she's in love with another guy...doesnt know why? or doesnt know why he loves her? why the other one loves her? hahahaha im terrible at this but i love this anyway.