Sonnet I - Comments

  • raroman

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    Do you know sonnet 180 by Shakespeare
    April 29th, 2012 at 10:53pm
  • stencil heart.

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    So I was totally drawn to thus because I have a weird obsession with sonnets. You've got some great metaphors in here. Utterly brilliant. The last little bit is my favorite, because a) I like the word "entwined" a lot, and when it's used well (as you used it) it's just great, and b) It just creates a perfect image. Beautiful.
    April 23rd, 2012 at 08:18am
  • Sapphire Eternity

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    You have some really great metaphors in this poem and the words flow nicelt. Just like Divide y Venceras said.

    This is a really sweet poem and it's very well written :)
    March 28th, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • ModernWaste

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    Wow, this is great, the words flow nice, and it definitely paints a vivid picture of winter in my head
    March 28th, 2012 at 09:18am