Sonnet I - Comments

Do you know sonnet 180 by Shakespeare

So I was totally drawn to thus because I have a weird obsession with sonnets. You've got some great metaphors in here. Utterly brilliant. The last little bit is my favorite, because a) I like the word "entwined" a lot, and when it's used well (as you used it) it's just great, and b) It just creates a perfect image. Beautiful.

You have some really great metaphors in this poem and the words flow nicelt. Just like Divide y Venceras said.

This is a really sweet poem and it's very well written :)

Wow, this is great, the words flow nice, and it definitely paints a vivid picture of winter in my head