Moonlight - Comments

  • Ghoul Scouts

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    Very wonderful flow, and I like how this poem doesn't make sex seem like taboo.
    October 12th, 2012 at 01:54am
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    That was perfect! It flowed well, the images were vivid and your words were chosen just right. Just amazing!
    July 16th, 2012 at 04:35am
  • spencer hastings.

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    This is beautiful. It really doesn't take away from the innocence that sex can actually carry. And I think you worded everything beautifully. I like how you use the moonlight to travel from one part of the body to another. This poem flows beautifully. Good job!
    June 2nd, 2012 at 07:40pm
  • Dead Puppeteer

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    This poem is very beautiful. The style and the way you write is brilliant. The title kind of pulled me in, but as I was reading I realized it really wasn't about moonlight. I love the way you make it so.
    May 26th, 2012 at 06:38am
  • not here anymore

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    The style here is perfections. It's a flow that's a disjointed type almost but still runs together. I like the title of the poem being the main IMAGERY and not the main subject.

    This also reads as.. Secretly sexy, lol. Not like a virgin making love for the first time, but a couple in love making love together.. An intimate experience that's so personal and close to th heart but its also undeniably sex, and I like that you include that. A lot of people separate sex and making love, but making love is sex, just a type of it and you've illustrated that wonderfully.

    Speaking of illustrations, yours give me chills almost. It's so.. [i]real[/i]. It's not just comparisons and fancy words but the reality of what's happening. It keeps you centered but you still take the reader into a poetic world. And I love the ending. Ashamed, but unashamed at the same time. A beautiful ending to a beautiful poem.
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:17am
  • owltype

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    I love this newer version of Moonlight. Not that I didn't love the first version--I did. But this one flows so much better.
    April 18th, 2012 at 06:15am