Feeding Frenzy - Comments

I'm not one for reading poetry but I saw that Haylie recommended it so I thought I'd swing by. I'm so glad that I did. I absolutely love this. I'm beautiful and yet chilling all at the same time. Excellent job c:

(And now I feel stupid, because I saw you'd classified this as lyrics. My apologies. But hey, at least you know they definitely work as lyrics!)

I don't know if you intended it this way, but as I was reading this, I could almost imagine it was a song. It has that sort of structure, and it brought a melody to mind for me and I found myself singing it as opposed to simply reading.

It sent chills down my spine the way things differ from the first stanza to the third. It's just so vastly different, one being comforting the other being potentially nightmare inducing.

Again, I found I quite enjoyed this. =)

xoxo
HJ.