This is chilling and I love that. It makes you think of who the harbinger is and what that means to everyone around them. Also, who the life is or whether it is the harbinger themself.
In the future, remember to proof-read your work. The last line has a few typos and this can distract the reader from the atmosphere of the poem.
I love the meanings within this poem; it can be taken literally as a story or interpreted in a more cryptic way. The use of second person in the last line is really powerful and I love the whole thing. :]
In the future, remember to proof-read your work. The last line has a few typos and this can distract the reader from the atmosphere of the poem.
I love the meanings within this poem; it can be taken literally as a story or interpreted in a more cryptic way. The use of second person in the last line is really powerful and I love the whole thing. :]