Tainted Memories - Comments

You convey a lot of emotion in this and I think that's the reason I like it so much. It seems that the structure of the poem, the terse lines of emotion, really reflect that feeling that you're trying to give off. You've done a great job here!

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This is really good. I don't usually read poetry, but you've managed to convey a lot of emotion in this, and I think that's what makes it good. I like how your sentences are short and snappy at times, it adds to the general feel of the poem. I don't get the purple elephant part, but aside from that, I thought this was fab. Well done!