Daddy Dearest - Comments

  • Lolita. Interesting allusion. I do actually know what you mean, the book, right?
    One thing I don't understand is the use of the parentheses on the last lines of each stanza. I always thought that the parentheses meant that the line was optional or added later, so I'm wondering why you used them here, other than for visual effect.
    Very interesting poem though. I'll have to read your story now to find out the connection.
    July 29th, 2012 at 06:27am