Your poem is beautiful. Short. To the point. The end father part is confusing, if there are parents involved you could mention them more maybe. And do you mean the Creator? Because He isn't a father he is absolute. One of a kind you know?
He does not beget nor is he begotten. That's creating a kinship tie to one who has no kin and created everything. So the father part is vague. I love the rest. Perfectly imperfect. Beautiful. :)
He does not beget nor is he begotten. That's creating a kinship tie to one who has no kin and created everything. So the father part is vague. I love the rest. Perfectly imperfect. Beautiful. :)