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  • MustBeTheSugar

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    "What a shame...
    This had to end?"
    You said you couldn't think of an ending, would this work?
    November 21st, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • The Neverlander

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    I really like this! I love the simple complexity and the vivid emotions. well done!!
    October 23rd, 2012 at 12:41am
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