I really like this poem. a few points of criticism, you have a great flowing rhyme scheme most of the poem but "for" doesn't quite rhyme with "unsure". I like the first stanza the best. I almost feel like that's where the roots lie and the rest of the poem kind of flows from it. I just wish there was more elaboration because it's a good idea and I want to read more. Again, good poem
November 7th, 2012 at 12:46am