I fake a smile - Comments

@ Mourningstar13
Thanks for the criticism, I really appreciate it :)
And ya, I actually had no idea what I was writing about I just wrote, so I wasn't sure if it made sense or not but thank you soooo much for reading! And I'm glad that you liked it <3

Deceit should be deceive. You could use a better title-it's not very creative, so I didn't initially want to read your poem, even though it actually turned out to be very good. It's a bit misleading, so if you get a better title, you'll get more readers. Over all, I liked it, very good-the concept struck a bit of a chord with me. I like the style you used here-criticizing someone for being fake, then revealing that they were hurt, and then finally revealing that the subject of the poem and the narrator were the same person. Good job.