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  • monaoe10

    monaoe10 (100)

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    Confused about title. Like poem
    November 17th, 2012 at 06:54pm
  • ChristineLRM

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    @ Dasjuden
    Thank you. Eighteen year old me had a lot of emotions and didn't care so much for proper punctuation. I appreciate the comments!
    November 17th, 2012 at 06:37am
  • FloatingInThePast

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    The title is very enticing. A pretty good poem too, although I'd fix a few errors you had like "took them all with a nod and a smiled"
    November 17th, 2012 at 06:25am
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