I really like this poem; you can look at it in many different ways but it always draws together with the feeling of being lost, and that is something I can really relate to ;) keep it up darling! -V ;)
Wow, this is truly amazing and beautiful. I can definitely relate to this. It's so powerful and true. You did a wonderful job. :) Can't wait to read more of yours. :D
This is quite a good poem, I especially like lines 6-16 :) very creative and you have great use of imagery and feeling. I love the ending too, great way to finish it. Great job :)