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  • Rebel Legend

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    I hope i feel this way one day! This is truly awsome!
    April 16th, 2013 at 12:41am
  • poetryismymedicine

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    wow this is amazing i love how you refered to the persons eyes as like an ocean with some unknown force pulling you deeper and deeper into it
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:56am
  • Annabutt

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    Um why can you write this well it's not fair
    February 28th, 2013 at 02:48am
  • Forbidden_Samurai

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    Wow. This was a great piece. I really enjoyed it. I love the ocean and always fantisized falling for a guy with eyes that shade.
    ~Keep writing!
    February 15th, 2013 at 07:09pm
  • HelloIt'sLee

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    I really like this poem; you can look at it in many different ways but it always draws together with the feeling of being lost, and that is something I can really relate to ;) keep it up darling!
    -V ;)
    February 14th, 2013 at 02:10am
  • freakivampire

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    holy shit your fantastic!
    February 7th, 2013 at 07:57pm
  • Mistress Bathory

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    This is a really great metaphor for being lost, I hope you keep writing poetry like this :)
    February 7th, 2013 at 12:54am
  • Guardian_0131

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    Wow, this is truly amazing and beautiful. I can definitely relate to this. It's so powerful and true. You did a wonderful job. :) Can't wait to read more of yours. :D
    February 5th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • Orchidgrrl

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    This is quite a good poem, I especially like lines 6-16 :) very creative and you have great use of imagery and feeling. I love the ending too, great way to finish it. Great job :)
    February 5th, 2013 at 04:37am
  • love me love me not

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    this poem i love lol i can conect with it soooo much keep it up missy ;)
    February 5th, 2013 at 02:48am
  • Lunar.Moon

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    I really love this poem, it's really fadulouis=D
    February 4th, 2013 at 11:54pm