We Are the Daughters - Comments

I am with the comment before. It is a testament to those who have wasted the very things that people literally died for. The bluntness of this poem is met with a certain sweet flow that is drunk in with a sort of bitter satisfaction. Bitter from the words that are true but satisfying to know that the truth is still being proclaimed. Remind me to ask you for 5 words so I can write a poem for you. You deserve a good one.

This is very didactic in a way and I deeply thank you for writing something so real to life. Each line just slaps you in the face, you hardley give us time to breathe before another slap comes in the next line. I admire this. It's a shout out to all the women in the world who choose to screw their lives up. I love it. It almost sounds like a speech. Something a woman's rights council member would say to get women back on their feet. I love your writing style, it amazes me. Thanks for writing something I won't forget!