Medicine - Comments

@ kittenkat95
ahhh
"Is there then a world where I rule absolutely on fate?..."
"The power of preserving."
"Revenge of a mortal hand."~ Wislawa Szymborska. :)

@ dfident
I think they already are. When you write from your heart, truthfully, then all those feeling will be expressed naturally.
"...let that page come out of you
Then, it will be true..." - Langston Hughes

@ kittenkat95
I just want a way to make my poetry inspirational, heart-warming, and motivational... I want my poems to be profound. :)

@ dfident
You're quite right and welcome =) When you ask for suggestions what are you asking for? Themes? Inspiration? Topics in which to write? Styles to write with? I would give them if I knew what you wanted and if I had them, but alas I do not.

@ kittenkat95
Sporadic? :) That is for when poetry becomes spoken word. When the words are spoken the power is more... intense. Thank you. Any suggestions?

I love how your writing seems sporadic at times but I feel it's perfectly precise. I can't get enough!

I love how your writing seems sporadic at times but I feel it's perfectly precise. I can't get enough!

@ ThatOtherWeirdPoet
will you read my others please?? i want as much review as possible

Nope. :)

@ ThatOtherWeirdPoet
ty. :) any suggestions?

This is amazing. :)

@ themerryoldlandofoz
Thank you. Any suggestions? :)

This is really well written. It's lovely.