The Wedding - Comments

Wow. I would love to be at that wedding and the ones to come after.

I must agree,it is a really good poem! You are very talented:)!

dfident said it all, this is an amazing poem. :)

Well done. :) First of all the meter along with the rhyme scheme is MAHHHVELOUS! :) Lolz I loved it. Every line just ran off the tongue and flowed so well, even while telling a narrative. I'm not sure if that was an intentional homonym at the end with the word "to", however the message is given accross. I love how the poem is open to interpretation and there is hidden symbolism. :D Wonderful job and I would love a poet such as yourself to, if you have the time or inclination, review a few of my poems. I want as much criticism as possible. :) But overll please keep writing you have a beautiful talent. :)