Oh my gosh, I love this poem so much! It just flows really well and your word choice is perfect. I think that the second line is probably my favorite. It's just... I don't know, powerful?
The poem is a little vague, like I can't tell if it's about a certain event or what it's about, but the reader can pick up on the mood of it and it does invoke an emotion. It gives me kind of an eerie feeling, if that makes sense. It's the type of poem that you just want to read out loud because of the rhythm and the flow.
The poem is a little vague, like I can't tell if it's about a certain event or what it's about, but the reader can pick up on the mood of it and it does invoke an emotion. It gives me kind of an eerie feeling, if that makes sense. It's the type of poem that you just want to read out loud because of the rhythm and the flow.