First of all Harry Potter. I'm already in love. Secondly, this is great.
There were a few parts that seemed to fall a bit flat, but overall everything was wound together nicely and if anyone didn't know of Harry Potter this would be a great thing to show them as a sort of introduction of sorts.
I am absolutely in love with this! I have loved Harry Potter all my life and this is just plain amazing. I love how you tried to make everything rhyme, it had a really nice flow to it.
I love how each stanza revolves around one part of the wizarding world. I have yet to come across a poem like this and I am in love with it!
There were a few parts that seemed to fall a bit flat, but overall everything was wound together nicely and if anyone didn't know of Harry Potter this would be a great thing to show them as a sort of introduction of sorts.
Good job.