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  • Michael Westen

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    First of all Harry Potter. I'm already in love. Secondly, this is great.

    There were a few parts that seemed to fall a bit flat, but overall everything was wound together nicely and if anyone didn't know of Harry Potter this would be a great thing to show them as a sort of introduction of sorts.

    Good job.
    January 2nd, 2016 at 08:42am
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    @ samrway
    Thank you :)
    December 18th, 2015 at 09:49am
  • JJ Everlasting;

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    I am absolutely in love with this! I have loved Harry Potter all my life and this is just plain amazing. I love how you tried to make everything rhyme, it had a really nice flow to it.

    I love how each stanza revolves around one part of the wizarding world. I have yet to come across a poem like this and I am in love with it!

    xxx
    ~Sam
    December 17th, 2015 at 11:41pm
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    @ Sleepy.Phil.Hina
    tehe Thank you I was bored lol!
    May 10th, 2013 at 01:39pm
  • Iron Man.

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    Awww!This so adorable and I love how it rhymes! <3
    May 10th, 2013 at 04:47am