The City of Charm - Comments

  • phantomatthewindow

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    glad you guys like it, for real :)
    @discoveringclouds, i'm not sure what you're getting at but i think you have me confused for a religious person. i'm not trying to justify and i'm certainly not trying to avoid anything. but i don't believe that admiration (however lustful) of this amazing human body is sinful in the slightest. that girls bum was as much part of that day as sitting over the harbour, a smaller part sure, but still a beautiful part nonetheless. :) i'm not even sure what i was trying to get at with this honestly but it definitely wasn't a religious statement. a spiritual statement maybe, but i still dont know what that moment meant. sorry if i offended you but at least i made you think ;) and thank you for sharing your thoughts
    July 30th, 2013 at 05:17am
  • discoveringclouds

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    I like how you create imagery about how God made everything so perfect, even the the contrasts. It sounds so interesting and sounds so right. It just fits, you know?

    It was a little weird that you mentioned a girls bum in your moment catching poem. Although it could be true it sounds so wrong when you mentioned God. And how great God is. I'm not saying in perfect but it made me stop to think which is good. Like don't most major religions say to lower your gaze and not talk on and on about your sins? It kind if justifies it I guess. Makes it easier to do, so that's why we should avoid it I guess. I don't know exactly so let me know your thoughts.

    Overall nice poem, I'm glad I caught that article on the main page.
    June 16th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • Cinco de Jenna

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    this is awesome, I live near Bmore and I love the way you expressed the Harbour. Love it!
    June 14th, 2013 at 11:17pm
  • phantomatthewindow

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    thanks, i'm glad you guys like it. wish i could figure out how to edit it though lol.
    May 30th, 2013 at 09:11pm
  • ninahx

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    This was great! An amazing poem, I love your imagination and the words you have chosen for this poem! (: Good job with this one. I liked this very much.
    May 30th, 2013 at 08:51pm
  • ramonafrancis

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    This is awesome
    May 30th, 2013 at 07:36pm