Baby - Comments

  • this poem is really sad and really happy. I'm quite the daydreamer myself and i Know what it's like to daydream you life away with potential relationships and romances but it's a bit sad because it's something that's very unlikely to happen. I definitely know what the school girl crush is like and I can that this is what this lovely haiku based off of.

    Overall I think it's very cute that holds a lot of meaning in such few words and the layout adds an actual pizzazz to it. Awesome job :D! I love it.
    August 7th, 2013 at 05:18am