This poem was so angry but still desperate, and somehow it made me feel fragile and hurt. It's amazing, the strong feeling of confusion and hate I could actually feel while reading it. It's just a bit hard to read, maybe you should put some spaces between the lines. It doesn't bother me, but it might be hard for some people to understand it. Great poem, though. (:
June 6th, 2013 at 12:19am