July 9th, 2013 at 09:35pm
This is amazing. I did a read through (a few times) this morning, and have been reflecting on it since then.
I found your poem both very erotic, and very genuine: who doesn't see other people and daydream of a life apart? I do it all of the time - especially with people I meet online. I have created muses from friendships, and I daydream about them, and write for them; just as you wish to conform to the needs of your subject, I wish to conform to the needs of my muses. I don't think I'm alone in this, yet how often do we openly admitting to these harmless crushes? For me, rarely - and only because many are simply that - harmless crushes of girls I daydream about.
So it's nice to hear that I'm not alone.
I found your poem both very erotic, and very genuine: who doesn't see other people and daydream of a life apart? I do it all of the time - especially with people I meet online. I have created muses from friendships, and I daydream about them, and write for them; just as you wish to conform to the needs of your subject, I wish to conform to the needs of my muses. I don't think I'm alone in this, yet how often do we openly admitting to these harmless crushes? For me, rarely - and only because many are simply that - harmless crushes of girls I daydream about.
So it's nice to hear that I'm not alone.