This poem was beautiful! It doesn't exactly tell about only one thing, so it was very easy for me to relate to this poem. It could basically be about forbidden love, or a dreamland without an abusive relationship, or then just about the dream of becoming beautiful. But I think that every person is beautiful, so maybe the person in this poem just doesn't think that she's beautiful. As she says "in today's society". Because in the society of these days to be "beautiful" many people think they should be skinny and blond and tall and all that.. It's so sad. I love the line "I need a breaak from the rush rush rush", because that is also what today's society is about. You're always in such a hurry that you don't have the time to stay in the moment and just chill out or relax a bit. A great poem! To me it was about falling asleep and forgetting all the difficulties and pressure of the world. I loved it. Keep up the good work!
July 15th, 2013 at 10:40am