Let it happen - Comments

  • @ ninahx
    Thank you... That's exactly what I wanted people to think, because it was exactly what I was thinking about while writing this poem. Loved your comment :)
    July 24th, 2013 at 10:03am
  • July 24th, 2013 at 10:02am
  • Oh my.. I don't even know what to say. Except that I had to read this twice to understand what is really happening. First time I thought that maybe you are talking about braking up and letting go, in a very sad and desperate way.. This really made me feel so.. Sad and maybe a bit betrayed. Because she is obviously telling someome who loved her long ago, to let go of her or leave her alone. But then, the second time I read this I realised that you could be talking about suicide as well, as she says that she'll be falling down. This poem is so emotional, and I love your language! I also admire every single line of this, but my favourite line was "Took a step back and fainted into infinity". That just makes this poem so mysterious, makes you think what this is really about. A great piece of art! I loved it(:
    July 15th, 2013 at 10:26am