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  • fascination.

    fascination. (100)

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    First off I really like your layout and I also LOVE that you have a haiku that rhymes. I've never seen that and I must admit I quite love it!

    In addition to the rhyming, I love this poem so much. I like how it tells so much about change and what it means in just 15 words. Change can be both amazing for you (light) or scary and not so great (dark) and I love how you used light and dark instead of saying bad and good; it's a more poetic approach to things.

    You definitely have a great piece here and I'm so glad I came upon it! Awesome job :).
    August 6th, 2013 at 08:33pm