I like that this has a nostalgic feel, and how so many people don't want to look back on their life yet you've made this character yearning to look back at how far they've come - absolutely beautifully done. I've read some of your others but this stood out to me, maybe because I often look back on my own life.
Good job, conveying the message. I'd definitely love seeing more like this.
Good job, conveying the message. I'd definitely love seeing more like this.