Oh man you are an amazing writer! Weaving words into beautiful poetry :)
October 17th, 2013 at 05:29pm
Oh wow how do you think my writing is any good is someone paying you? Has my mom like secretly contacted you or something.... XD
No but in all seriousness this was breathtaking. You're a natural, gifted writer and I've never read a poem about the Iraq war. The use of the word "puppet" is one of my favorite words to use in poems because there's so much symbolism. Especially for a topic like this. To be able to convey a very large and complicated topic into merely 20 lines is absolutely amazing. Every word punctured meaning and the layout fits so nicely with the imagery you're portraying.