I'm here judging the first round of Sixth Time's the Charm!
The one thing that really sticks out to me when I read this is the rhyme scheme. I'm not usually a big fan of constant rhymes in poems but this poem has this really urgent feel to it and the rhyme just makes for faster reading, which I think works perfectly in terms of the subject choice. It's very dark and perfectly worded. I get a really strong sense of the emotions you've poured into this and it's almost uncomfortable to read in areas, which is really impressive because I don't get uncomfortable easily.
The one thing that really sticks out to me when I read this is the rhyme scheme. I'm not usually a big fan of constant rhymes in poems but this poem has this really urgent feel to it and the rhyme just makes for faster reading, which I think works perfectly in terms of the subject choice. It's very dark and perfectly worded. I get a really strong sense of the emotions you've poured into this and it's almost uncomfortable to read in areas, which is really impressive because I don't get uncomfortable easily.
All in all, great job!