Daddy Forbids - Comments

  • wish on a firefly

    wish on a firefly (885)

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    This is very spooky yet kind of funny at the same time. It's very good though and definitely captures the spirit of Halloween very well.
    December 7th, 2017 at 01:01am
  • electrovoid

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    This has a very eerie feeling to it, and the description is strong. I like the fourth stanza best, mostly because of the "Daddy we are dressed up in our human form all year long"
    July 20th, 2017 at 04:22pm