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  • nearly witches.

    nearly witches. (15250)

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    Here judging the fourth round of Sixth Time's the Charm! Cute

    I really like the whole writing theme that goes through this poem! It's the first time I've actually come across it in the contest (someone using writing / reading as a topic, that is) and it's really refreshing to read about! Honestly, I think at one point everyone has wondered why they can't just jump into their favourite novel so it's really comforting to see that this poem deals with that and voices it, because it does make the emotions seem more real and solidified.

    Your stanza structure is really nice as well. I like the triplet lines at the end too, they just seem to really tie everything together nicely. Great job!
    February 13th, 2014 at 09:09pm