Melancholy of the Mute - Comments

Beautiful, I love it. Great wording and the very intriguing story it tells.

Wow! This amazing! It's unique and has a strong complex emotion that pulls at the heart and soul. You truly have a gift for words.
I have to agree with Ariveria, those where my favorite lines as well and though I never had a problem making myself understood, I would also spend my nights "pulling stars out of the sky."
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
~Keep writing!

This is so beautiful. I'm... I don't even really know what to say. This whole poem is written so smoothly and gracefully, the rhymes make sense and it doesn't feel like you had to stretch to force them in. It's sad and lovely. I think my favorite lines are:

"And I spent my evenings pulling stars out of the sky.
And I'd arrange them on the lawn where I would lie.
And in the wind I'd taste the dreams of distant lives.
And I would dress myself up in them through the night."

That's just... it's really pretty. I'm sorry I can't leave a better comment, haha. But I love this poem. Excellent work. :)