Very close. The part about the father is correct, and he hates the narrator for being with his daughter. Thus the curses spilling from her head. The two decide to commit suicide together and die, their souls floating in the air. Not having to care for time anymore, the narrator gives his whole self to the girl as he watched her die. Ring rolling across the floor was just an attempt to put the image in your head that after she cut herself she went unconscious and limply fell to the ground. 'But they cut your eyes wide open.' They meaning the paramedics that came and saved her life at the last second. The narrator watches and hopes that she doesn't give up on death because he won't be able to reach her. She survives, and he sinks into the sea instead of floating in the air. Wrapped in piano strings is something tied around him making him unable to keep himself from falling. The only person that can save him is the girl, but she doesn't say the words to keep him alive. He haunts her as he watches her live her life and move on without him, waiting for her to die and go to his side. Once he accepted it, that's when he again sinks, but this time he falls towards hell. The creatures are the screaming people already there, and the airplanes and engines are a metaphor for fire and smoke, which at the end burn and bury him for good and he's forever separated from the girl. Sorry for the super long explanation!
November 16th, 2013 at 07:43pm
